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WOOHOO A CRITIQUE It's obvious I don't know what I'm doing here ._.

Anyway!
Mmm such a touching - and beautiful - artwork! It makes me just go, 'awwwww,' to look at it. Amazing fur textures and shading, the reflections of Umbreon's gold rings are just perfect! The background and colours capture the mood nicely, with the greens and yellows and pale sunlight-

Though perhaps a bit too pale? For the darker tones used on the Espeon and Umbreon, they don't seem to fit in with their surroundings... Where the Pokemon touch the ground, the shadows should be more intense than they are here; it gives them the feeling of disconnection from the background and they seem almost like they're floating.

BUT OTHER THAN THAT...
It's a perfectly beautiful picture! *pats face*
So... cuuuute >.< -shot- Damn the rating system.
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:iconchaoslavawolf:
~chaoslavawolf Nov 23, 2009  Student Filmographer
Thanks for the crit~ ^__^ haha yeah I actually thought about those 2 things you mentioned, but it faded into my back of my mind and out~ D8 *headdesk*
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:iconpokebleach:
a bit pale and umbreon is a bit to light other than that good
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:iconsilverbirch:
~Silverbirch Nov 22, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Aww, come on; you can't have a sun-cast scene in the forest without it being pale D: Adds to the soothing effect, y'know?
Which then casts light upon the Umbreon in an AESTHETICALLY PLEASING MANNER -shot- On that topic, black, when lit, is then no longer black. Especially if it's something funky like fur.
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:iconpokebleach:
i know its a dark gray
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:iconchaoslavawolf:
~chaoslavawolf Nov 23, 2009  Student Filmographer
lol, if everybody were the exact color they're supposed to be, the picture would be a little flat, no? x3;
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:iconpokebleach:
XD true u make a good point
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